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IL PIRATA

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Maybe I'm biased but we're still talking about an erotic game. Criticism should be constructive and not demotivating to continue playing. Too many Devs then abandon and move on game new.
Dany, at the moment I haven't received any insults regarding this update, they will come, but the fact that everyone expresses their opinion doesn't bother or concern me.
You know very well that I haven't used Renpy and Daz Studio for a long time, I'm happy with the progress made even if I remain the most critical of my work, only in this way can I improve.
 

IL PIRATA

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Jan 25, 2021
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Such gorgeous models and female protagonist. Too bad.
I understand the different preferences, unfortunately I have two other games in development with a female protagonist, I'm afraid that a fourth one that meets this request is impossible due to time constraints. To ‘forgive’ me, I'll post a 4k image of the protagonist. Screen_01.png
 

noxcha

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Keep it up, man! You have one of the hottest female protagonists on this site. The rendering, in general, is A+. I think the main problems right now are the animations and the lack of real choices.
I'll keep an eye on this project.
 

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Jokes aside, I'm not really into FMC games that don’t include lesbian routes, since a lot of them end up treating women as objects just to serve the male characters. I will give this game a try later when I get a better sense of how the relationships with other characters are handled.
 

Ven95

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Why this game???
Seems pretty obvious from a narritve point of view, doesn't it?

The setup, as I said before, is stupid, starting with the question how some of these people are called her friends since none of them behaves like one, followed up with why on earth she would even be on this vacation. Either put more effort into making that plausible or just have her kidnapped. Which probably would lead to other problems when she needs to interact with her so called friends, but that's the setup.

Going forth from that point, which can still lead to a good story, a pure lesbian route while she needs a pure male substance, doesn't work out.

Anyway, I have hope for the revenge route, lets see where we can get with this.
 

smarty101

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Sep 7, 2024
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What an incredibly stupid premise. Also really bad form to give us an intro chapter with no choices other than a game over. Submission and blackmail is not hot unless there is a chance of resisting it. This is akin to having put a gun to her head and pulling the trigger if she declines to drink.
I completely agree, the game could have so much potential, yet you have no choice to fight, unfortunately the creator seems hell bent on creating a totally SUBMISSIVE cumslut, if that's your goal at least place it in the games overview so people don't waste there time
 

Slickjack

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May 29, 2020
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Such gorgeous models and female protagonist. Too bad.
The female models all seem to be the same! If that fits your standard of beauty, then you are right. If your standards are different then you're SOL.

On the other hand, at least the Dev has not burdened himself with the "too many LI's" curse. In my opinion, that bodes well for the eventual conclusion of the VN. Another positive indication that the VN might reach a conclusion is in the Hints/Walkthrough notation about how to deal with discovering the poison bottle as reference is made to future events. This indicates that the story is already, at least in skeleton form, drawn up.

In the best of all possible worlds, the Dev/Author would at least have a detailed outline of how the story will progress complete with chapters/days, scenes, and purpose of the scenes already laid out. The actual dialogue need not be already written, but a definite precis of the full story including how the points are earned and the effects of them should be already in hand.

The Dev desperately needs to acquire the services of an educated, native, English speaker to proof-read and edit the script.rpy file. The story needs to be delivered without the distraction of the narration and dialogue's poor English usage. The instances of the wrong gender for pronouns, prepositions without objects, etc. are just too off-putting for the reader. Some phrases, which may be idiomatic in the Dev's native language need to be replaced with something similarly idiomatic is English. I cannot stress enough how much any VN can be improved by simply having the script.rpy file proof-read by a native speaker. Simply running it through Google translate and a spell-checker is not enough.

- sj
 
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